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Madame B :icondollmistress:Dollmistress 7 3
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Randoms - pink doll and owner :icondollmistress:Dollmistress 20 3
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Replis City Blues - more random previews :icondollmistress:Dollmistress 28 12
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Seismic Girl or Hammer Girl or... :iconkristinf:KristinF 52 50
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Mermaid's Purse :icondreampaintloon:DreampaintLoon 90 6
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Princess, Charming :iconnuclear-fridge:Nuclear-Fridge 6 6
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the commander :iconartdude41:artdude41 79 40
Plastic Attack :iconchainedknee:chainedknee 79 29
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Vauntastic :iconfransmensinkartist:FransMensinkArtist 467 79
Two on Display :iconaszmo:Aszmo 73 13 The Fabulous Five :iconaszmo:Aszmo 118 10 Biomech Two :iconmidniyt:Midniyt 75 18 Null - 20170306 015 :iconservitrix:servitrix 20 2 Paranormal Activity Mario :iconh2ojames93:H2oJames93 111 44 Jessica shopping tour ... (IRay) :icondarkhound1:darkhound1 75 50
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Iraq - Five captured soldiers 001 :iconskatingjesus:SkatingJesus 363 118
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exsorbeo :icondelasilverado:delasilverado 288 12
Be Still :iconthemichaelmacrae:TheMichaelMacRae 5,173 203
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Wet :icontweezetyne:TweezeTyne 67 9

Critiques

by Shimeri

There isn't much in this picture to criticise - the character design, rendering, lighting scheme, texture quality and overall mood are ...


I don't have much to say about this image - there are no technical flaws in the render, the model is posed expressively and the texture...

by Femfan1

I love the cape, water effects and expressions. The overall idea is great and the costumes have been put together very well, plus the l...


You've lost clear panel borders for the entire page - borders are very important and although previously you've played with fully boxed...

Which is your favourite Adventure in the Miss Adventure game? 

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54 deviants said The Dollhouse finale
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28 deviants said The Goldstein one
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18 deviants said The Tsundere one
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17 deviants said The Beach one
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16 deviants said The Gym one
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15 deviants said The Gorgona/Rouge one
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12 deviants said The TabLabs one
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5 deviants said The Menace
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5 deviants said The Melanie rescues
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2 deviants said The Gloria one

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There isn't much in this picture to criticise - the character design, rendering, lighting scheme, texture quality and overall mood are all handled very well.

The image's best and most interesting feature is its use of colour - the villain is clearly accompanied by dark/cool tones of blues and blacks that are gradually overshadowing the heroine's warmer reds and pinks. Colour choice has been very good throughout, and the heroine's white underwear is an especially wise decision to contrast with her red hair and achieve an immediate sense of her as the main character and central focus of the picture. I'd strongly advise that as the scene progresses, the villain's colour palette grows even more dominant, to the point that the hero becomes shrouded within it (though I suspect the artist might be reluctant to give up the trademark vibrant red hair on the heroine!).

If I had to point out a flaw, I would say the insistence on maintaining the exact same "camera angle" as the first image has limited the impact of this second one. The bed sheets at the top of the picture, overhead fabric at the top, and the bedposts/drapes on each side are now just dead space, doing nothing usseful for the scene. The view could have been zoomed in for tighter focus on the two characters in this shot, since the scene was already established in the previous one. Sometimes it can be useful to use the exact same angle and distance in multiple images of a sequence, but this isn't one of those times. The scene could have been made more intense and intimate with a closer or simply different angle in this second picture.

Another critique I'd have is simply personal taste - given the colours being used I think the villainess could have benefited from paler skin, darker lips and possibly dark painted nails. This would have contrasted more effectively with the heroine's skin tone and even allowed in later scenes for the heroine's tone to change into that of the villainess. As it stands, the warm skin of the villainess looks slightly odd since it's almost the same as the heroine's. But this is just nit-picking and the artist's choices in this area don't actually detract from the quality of the image.

Finally, there's a minor technical issue with the heroine's hair. Her braided bangs are clearly rigid, floating at the side of her face instead of falling naturally across her cheek. This could be deliberate - maybe the hair is meant to be stiff like that? However, more likely this is just a very minor oversight or limitation of the hair prop. Not a big deal, but something to keep in mind for future images especially since the bangs cast a shadow over her cheek, drawing attention to the fact that they aren't resting on it.

Overall the picture is technically excellent, shows great attention to detail and conveys a clear mood through use of colour and light. I can't really say it's particularly original, but not everything needs to be in order to look great. :)

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lexxii Featured By Owner Edited Apr 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi Doll Welcome to Global Super Group :star: :iconcutieshots: :star: & :new: Chat Room :star: Please enjoy your membership :star: Thank you :star: xoLexxiiCutieShots :rose:
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lexxii Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Great Gallery & Invite to join Global Super Group :star: :iconcutieshots: :star: & :new: Chat Room :star: Members Deviations Auto=Approved :star: Please join soon :star: xoLexxiiCutieShots :rose:
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NinaPowa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
I hope you're doing good sweetie c:
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Dollmistress Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I'm doing okay. There's a bunch of scary RL stuff going on at work but I am healthily ignoring it :D
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NinaPowa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017
Aww I hope it's not really bad!
Take care c:
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SlootySlots Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice bimbo factory you've got here:boing::happybounce:
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Kerberusz Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
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Dollmistress Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwe thanks!

Happy New year to you too :D
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Enhjorning Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016
Thanks for the :+fav:
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ObviousAgent Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2016
D.M anyword on any of your games progression? Hoping to see Replis city blues appearing soon..
Also keep up the great art and stories, its appreciated.
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